考研英语作文 | 能写、会写、写的牛逼

作文：能写、会写、写的牛逼

大小作文都是三段式，无论大小作文，关键都是组织第二段的句子，第一段和第三段都是套话。首尾重在记体裁特征，中间段重在梳理逻辑链接词/句的顺序。自己数数句子词数，实际上不用写很多句。

小作文的关键是记几种特殊体裁格式，大作文的关键是记几种描述分析的句式，并要学会分析解读。实际上大作文记了句式，在小作文也可以用。

英语一作文类型：

  • 小作文（总体上分书信和通知两大类，纪要和便条要记格式以防万一）
    • 书信/邮件（建议信6次、介绍信3次、推荐信3次、邀请信3次、辞职信1次、道歉信1次）
    • 通知/告示（4次）
    • 纪要
    • 便条
  • 大作文（总体分单图表、多图表两类）
    • 图画
      • 两幅图画：分别描述
      • 一副图画：整体+细节
    • 图表
      • 动态图
      • 静态图
    • 混合图表
      • 两个图表：分别描述
      • 图画+图表：用画图模板

小作文

书信

书信的总体结构，第一段说明自己和对方关系，以及要做什么。第二段总分总，选一两个细节解释事情。第三段客套并发出邀约。

总体结构

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Dear [收信人],
    I am ...

    Specifically, my ...

    I hope ...

                                                													Yours sincerely,
                                                    													[你的名字]

称呼：

  • 男士女士：Dear + Mr. / Ms. / Mrs. / Miss / Dr. + 收信人名字
  • 尊称：Dear + Professor / Editor + 收信人名字
  • 群体：Classmates / Friends
  • 不确定/不知名：Dear Sir / Madam

结构（深色部分可自行替换，如一些连接词、过渡句、名词性成分，但要注意字数，尽量简洁、地道，不要弄巧成拙给老师制造不必要的难度）：

  • 第一段（你是谁，你要干什么）：
    ①（表明身份和关系）As + ⋯\cdots / On behalf of ⋯\cdots ,
    ②（表明目的）I am writing this letter to 实的 and to express 虚的
    • 实的常写：apply for / resign from / consult about / complain about / make suggestions about / offer sb. advice on
    • 虚的常写：my sincere congratulations / my heartfelt sympathy / my strong love for expectations
  • 第二段（总+分 分 分+总，写两三个细节/两个细节，一个展开补充）：
    • ①Specifically, the reasons / my thoughts / the details are as follows:
    • ②（描述细节1）To begin with ⋯\cdots, because ⋯\cdots .
      ③（描述细节2）In addition, ⋯\cdots .
      ④（对细节2的补充）As a result, ⋯\cdots .
    • ⑤（收尾）Above are my two important reasons for / details about / ideas regarding / sincere suggestions on ⋯\cdots
  • 第三段（客套+邀请+客套）：
    • ①（客套）Thank you for taking the time and patience to read my letter/email.
    • ②I would appreciate it if you could ⋯\cdots（应邀做某事）
    • ③（收尾）Looking forward to your early reply.

关键句型

  • 招募：如Volunteer should be aged between 18 and 35, and have a good command of English, because there’ll be a large number of activities in this conference that require fluency in English.
  • 深造：pursue further studies in ⋯\cdots
  • 给钱:
    • provide economic compensation / an allowance ⋯\cdots
    • reduce the economic burden/pressure on ⋯\cdots
  • 心理：
    • mental health issue / psychological distress
    • ⋯\cdots an issue that attracts the attention of all sectors of society ⋯\cdots
  • 书/电影：
    • It’s a classic novel that has been widely acclaimed by readers for its profound insights into human nature and social issues.
    • It’s a thought-provoking film that explores the complexities of human relationships and societal norms.
    • 记一两本好的书/电影，最好有名有姓，如《The Shawshank Redemption》,《Forrest Gump》

通知

注意格式，以及注意第一段、第三段的写法，第二段和书信一样。

总体结构

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            				    标题：（居中）Notice / Notification

Notice / Notification
                                                  												  （靠右写）时间
    第一段：XXXXXXX

    第二段：XXXXX

    第三段：XXXXX

                                                 												   （靠右写）署名

结构：

  • 第一段（说明谁要为了什么做什么）：
    • ①（可选）There is a great news!
    • ②（说事情）In order to + 目的, [通知方] + have/has intended to + 动作
      • 目的常写：enrich / inspire / solve the problem / encourage / help ⋯\cdots
      • 动作常写：hold (举办), recruit (招募), introduce (介绍), enrich (丰富), inspire (启发), solve the problem (解决问题), encourage (鼓励), help (帮助)
  • 第二段（和书信的第二段类似，总+分+总）：
    • ①Specifically, the reasons / details are as follows.
    • ②（描述细节1）To begin with ⋯\cdots, because ⋯\cdots.
      ③（描述细节2）In addition ⋯\cdots .
      ④（对细节2的补充）As a result ⋯\cdots
    • ⑤（收尾）Above are the two important details/reasons for ⋯\cdots
  • 第三段（提醒被通知者要注意，以及告知联系/报名方式）：
    • ①Please pay much attention to this notice.
    • ②（联系方式）If you're interested and want to know more info, you can contact us via 123@edu.com.
      或（报名方式）：If you wish to apply, you can send your resume to 123@edu.cn.
    • ③We're expecting your attendance / participation.
  • 署名：Students' Union / Postgraduates' Association

纪要

总体结构

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                                 Minutes

Date: [开会日期]
Place: [开会地点]
Present: [出席会议人物]

Summary
[正文内容]

																			Recorded by: [记录人]
																			Date: [整理日期]

注意事项：

  • ①标题：Minutes，类似通知的 Notice。
  • ②左上角：
    • Date：开会日期
    • Place：开会地点
    • Present：出席人物（题干会给，或自己编）
  • ③正文：可以用 Summary（总结）开头，是否空行无严格要求。灰色部分为正文。
  • ④右下角：
    • Recorded by：记录人姓名
    • Date：整理日期（通常滞后于左上角日期，例如周一开会，周三整理出来）

大作文

记逻辑和句式，灵活组合，对一两篇真题去进行测试，练临场组织的能力

单图表

整体结构总分总：第一段概要性的总结图表。第二段选切入点，具体分析数据/ 趋势，然后接上逻辑链接词/句，选一两个细节解释分析。第三段是结论与展望，灵活组织搭配，调节字数，不要字太多。

  • 第一段：描述图表（要简洁概要清晰）

    • 引入

      • This bar chart / line chart / pie chart / table illustrates [事] + [类型/维度] + [时间/地点]
      • [事]常写：the proportion of / the number / amount of / the percentage of / the rate of …

    • 描述变化

      • More specifically, in this survey, the number of [事] [变化]. At the same time, the number of [事] [变化].
      • 词汇库：
        • 不变：remain nearly stable
        • 上升：increased / climbed / rose / grew
        • 下降：decreased / declined / fell / dropped
        • 副词 (程度/速度)：
          • 大约：approximately / about / around / roughly
          • 轻微/平稳：slightly / steadily
          • 急剧/显著：sharply / significantly / strikingly
        • 速度描述：the growth rate of ⋯\cdots accelerated (加速) / slowed down (减速)

    • 描述极值

      • More specifically, in this survey, the proportion of [事] is the highest / lowest among ⋯\cdots, reaching ⋯\cdots. At the same time, [事] is also worthy of attention, with the proportion of ⋯\cdots

  • 第二段：分析趋势/原因

    • ①As can be seen from the chart / table, [具体描述]：
      • 趋势：[主语] is / are gaining / losing momentum. (正在增强/减弱势头)
      • 对比：If we look hard enough, we’ll find that ⋯\cdots
      • 极值分析：After thorough analysis, it’s evident that ⋯\cdots
    • +应试句②③④⑤（和之前的小作文一样，用连接词组织一两个句子展开一两个细节）

  • 第三段：结论/建议/展望，

    • 结构（三选一，用于调节字数，前面不够就多写点，前面够了就少写点）：
      • 看法 + 方法 + 展望
      • 看法 + 方法
      • 看法 + 展望
    • 看法
      • Now, it suddenly dawns on me that ⋯\cdots
      • Judging by what is discussed above, it’s not difficult to draw the conclusion that ⋯\cdots
    • 方法
      • The most obvious way forward would be ⋯\cdots
      • 关键句式：seize the opportunity to v. / give high priority to n. / greater emphasis must be placed on
      • [措施/政策/发力点]：
        • 立法监管：accelerate legislative work (加快立法工作) / strengthen supervision and punishment (加强监管和惩罚)
        • 宣传教育：enhance public awareness (提高公众意识) / launch massive campaigns (发起大规模活动) / educate the young (教育年轻人)
        • 社会支持：offer / provide financial support (提供财政支持) / improve social welfare system (完善社会福利体系)
        • 个人行动：cultivate a positive mindset (培养积极心态) / take concrete actions (采取具体行动)
    • 展望
      • On the whole, I do believe that the problem of ... will be solved / An increasing number of people will embrace the value of ....

组合型（图表+图画）

记几个特定描述，其他的和单图表模板一样

  1. 描述图画：In the left picture, it’s not difficult to see that ⋯\cdots
  2. 描述图表：At the same time, the chart / table on the left/right illustrates that ⋯\cdots
  3. Obviously, this set of image and table can offer us a golden opportunity to focus on ⋯\cdots（社会现象）(by depicting ⋯\cdots 概括)

写作升级

我的逻辑连接词/句：

第一套：
①To begin with, ⋯\cdots, because ⋯\cdots.
②In addition, ⋯\cdots
③As a result, ⋯\cdots.
④Above are the two important details/reasons for ⋯\cdots

第二套：
①First and foremost, ⋯\cdots, since ⋯\cdots.
②Furthermore, ⋯\cdots.
③Consequently, ⋯\cdots.
④These are the main reasons for / details regarding ⋯\cdots

第三套：
①Primarily, ⋯\cdots, considering that ⋯\cdots.
②Moreover, ⋯\cdots.
③Hence, ⋯\cdots.
④From what has been mentioned above, we can understand ⋯\cdots

能写→\rightarrow会写→\rightarrow牛逼坏了
写作文，先记结构，梳理逻辑。对照真题，写出来之后，自己对作文里的词、句进行升级。以下是一些技巧，自己选一套方案记就行，没必要都记：
下策（保证语法正确，字数足够）

  • 太难，写不出来？词汇与句子替换

    • 换单词：遇到写不出来的单词，暂时都用简单单词替换，保证拼写正确。
    • 换句子：遇到写不出来的长难句，暂时都写简单句，一定要保证语法正确。

  • 逻辑连接

    • 只要上下文的句子之间有逻辑关系（因果、转折、递进等），一定要用逻辑关系词（连词、副词、介词和介词短语）表示出来，使行文流畅、表意清晰。

中策（开始换词汇、换句式，给句子、词语“化妆”。替换低级实义动词为高级实义动词，替换be动词为其他系动词。给名词化妆是：写同位语、写简单的定语从句、It be句型。给非名词例如形容词动词化妆是写状语。给句式化妆例如：用and把两个简单句改为并列句、the more XXX the more XXX），

  • 实意动词替换：低级的实义动词替换为高级，例如 show →\rightarrow illustrate/indicate/demonstrate
  • think/believe →\rightarrow argue/claim/maintain/hold/contend
  • make/cause →\rightarrow render/enable/trigger/give rise to
  • want →\rightarrow desire/long for/crave
  • get →\rightarrow acquire/obtain/gain
  • help →\rightarrow assist/aid/facilitate
  • use →\rightarrow utilize/employ
  • solve →\rightarrow address/tackle/resolve
  • improve →\rightarrow enhance/boost/promote
  • 系动词替换：主系表的句子，把普通的be换成其他系动词，例如：There is XXX →\rightarrow There exist/remain/seem XXX

“There exist a host of undergraduates being fascinated with science.”

  • 名词化妆（定语/同位语）：
    • 同位语/插入语：见到名词，可有意识地在后面加个同位语（如 Persistence, an active mentality, is...），对名词进行解释说明。

      The data suggest, for example, that XXX.

    • 万能定语：使用 adj. + as well as + adj. 结构或 such as 举例。

      The problem, complicated as well as urgent, requires our immediate attention.

    • 主语从句，把主语后置（It be）：使用 It is ... that ... 句型避免头重脚轻。
      • 显而易见：It is apparent/common knowledge/universally acknowledged that ...
      • 我认为：It is my belief that ...
  • 非名词化妆（状语）：
    • 使用简单的介词短语做状语，修饰形容词或动词。
      • 表示时间
        I usually wake up at 9:00 AM.
      • 表示地点
      • 表示原因
        常见：because of, due to(只能放在句末), owing to(只能放在句首), on account of, thanks to, as a result of…
      • 表示方式
        通过：through, via, by
        以…方式：in ... manner, in ... way, in ... method, in ... fashion
      • 表示让步
        虽然、尽管：in spite of, despite, for all
        无论：regardlless of ...
      • 表示伴随
        with
  • the more the more：很好的表达越…越…

The more rapidly the government takes measures, the more effectively the problem will be solved.
The happier you are, the more friends you will have.

  • and连接简单句（不需要考虑有什么关系），并继续替换为高级表达

替换示例

  • and→and+有平行关系的逻辑关系词and \rightarrow and+有平行关系的逻辑关系词，例如：and+similarly
  • but→and+有转折关系的逻辑关系词but \rightarrow and+有转折关系的逻辑关系词，例如：and+however
  • or→and+有选择关系的逻辑关系词or \rightarrow and+有选择关系的逻辑关系词，例如：and+alternatively
  • so→and+有因果关系的逻辑关系词so \rightarrow and+有因果关系的逻辑关系词，例如：and+therefore

The government has issued new policies, and consequently, the problem is expected to be alleviated.

上策，搞高级句式

  • 上策教不了了，来不及了。总之，不要故意刁难老师，不要弄巧成拙，自己都看不懂的倒装、虚拟语气、省略，绝对不要写。下面举例被动语态（这个应该来得及）
  • 被动语态：当一句话不知道主语是谁，或者为了客观表达，多用被动语态，避免从头到尾都是I开头（如 It is suggested that...）。

必须指出坚持对成功很重要
“Persistance must be pointed out outstandingly (to be) crucial to success.”

越来越多的人认为家庭教育比学校教育重要。
（主动）More and more people believe that home education is more important than school education.
（被动）Home education is argued (to be) more important than school education in children’s growth.

过去几十年里，政府采取了各种措施防止灾害发生。
（被动）Various measures [in the past decades] have been taken [by goverment] to prevent disasters.

举例

AI写的，做示范而已，关键是自己练一练

2025英语一小作文

下策（基础词汇+逻辑连词）

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Dear Paul,
    As your classmate, I am very happy to hear from you. I am writing this letter to tell you about the show and to express my welcome.
    ①Specifically, the details are as follows: ②To begin with, the craftsmen will show us paper cutting, because it is interesting. ③In addition, you can help us move the desks. ④As a result, the classroom will be ready. ⑤Above are my two important details about the plan.
    Thank you for taking the time and patience to read my email. I would appreciate it if you could come this Friday. Looking forward to your early reply.
                                                                               						         Yours sincerely,
                                                                                        						Li Ming

中文翻译：

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亲爱的保罗：
    作为你的同学，很高兴收到你的来信。我写这封信是为了告诉你关于展览的事并表达我的欢迎。
    具体来说，细节如下：首先，工匠们将向我们要展示剪纸，因为它很有趣。此外，你可以帮我们搬桌子。因此，教室将会准备就绪。以上是我关于该计划的两个重要细节。
    感谢您抽出宝贵的时间和耐心阅读我的邮件。如果您这周五能来，我将不胜感激。期待您的早日回复。

中策（高级词汇+句式升级）

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Dear Paul,
    As your close friend, I felt excited when I received your message. I am writing this letter to explain the exhibition content and to express my sincere gratitude for your help.
    ①Specifically, the details are as follows: ②To begin with, the artists will demonstrate innovative clay modeling, because they want to combine tradition with modern art. ③In addition, you can assist us in designing posters. ④As a result, the atmosphere will be enhanced. ⑤Above are my two important details regarding the event.
    Thank you for taking the time and patience to read my email. I would appreciate it if you could join us in the preparation. Looking forward to your early reply.
                                                                               						        Yours sincerely,
                                                                               						         Li Ming

中文翻译：

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亲爱的保罗：
    作为你的好朋友，收到你的信息我感到很兴奋。我写这封信是为了解释展览内容，并对你的帮助表达我真挚的感谢。
    具体来说，细节如下：首先，艺术家们将展示创新泥塑，因为他们想要将传统与现代艺术结合起来。此外，你可以协助我们设计海报。因此，氛围将会得到提升。以上是我关于这次活动的两个重要细节。
    感谢您抽出宝贵的时间和耐心阅读我的邮件。如果您能加入我们的准备工作，我将不胜感激。期待您的早日回复。

升级解读（从下策到中策）：

  1. 身份与情感升级：从简单的 “classmate” 和 “happy” 升级为 “close friend” 和 “excited”，增加了情感色彩。
  2. 词汇替换：
    • tell →\rightarrow explain (解释)
    • show →\rightarrow demonstrate (展示/演示)
    • help →\rightarrow assist (协助)
    • paper cutting (简单的剪纸) →\rightarrow innovative clay modeling (创新的泥塑，更符合题目"innovative"的要求)
  3. 内容深化：理由从简单的 “interesting” 变成了具体的 “combine tradition with modern art”（结合传统与现代艺术），体现了思考深度。
  4. 任务具体化：从 “move the desks” (搬桌子) 这种体力活，变成了 “designing posters” (设计海报)，更具参与感。

上策（被动语态+复杂句式）

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Dear Paul,
    As the coordinator of this cultural event, I was thrilled to learn of your interest. I am writing this letter to elaborate on the demonstration program and to express my heartfelt appreciation for your support.
    ①Specifically, the details are as follows: ②To begin with, a fusion of traditional embroidery and 3D printing will be illustrated by the craftsmen, because innovation is vital for heritage preservation. ③In addition, promotional brochures are suggested to be designed by you. ④As a result, a wider audience is expected to be reached. ⑤Above are my two important details regarding your participation.
    Thank you for taking the time and patience to read my email. I would appreciate it if you could confirm your availability soon. Looking forward to your early reply.
                                                                               						        Yours sincerely,
                                                                            			  			          Li Ming

中文翻译：

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亲爱的保罗：
    作为本次文化活动的协调人，得知你的兴趣我感到非常激动。我写这封信是为了详细阐述演示项目，并对你的支持表达我衷心的感谢。
    具体来说，细节如下：首先，工匠们将展示传统刺绣与3D打印的融合，因为创新对于遗产保护至关重要。此外，建议由你来设计宣传册。因此，预计将覆盖更广泛的受众。以上是关于你参与的两个重要细节。
    感谢您抽出宝贵的时间和耐心阅读我的邮件。如果您能尽快确认是否有空，我将不胜感激。期待您的早日回复。

升级解读（从中策到上策）：

  1. 角色专业化：身份变为 “coordinator” (协调人)，语气更加正式和专业。情感词变为 “thrilled” (激动)。
  2. 词汇高级化：
    • explain →\rightarrow elaborate on (详细阐述)
    • show →\rightarrow be illustrated by (被…展示)
    • sincere gratitude →\rightarrow heartfelt appreciation (衷心的感谢)
  3. 句式复杂化（被动语态）：
    • 主动句 artists will demonstrate... 变为被动句 a fusion of... will be illustrated by...，强调了展示的内容本身。
    • 主动句 you can assist us... 变为被动建议 promotional brochures are suggested to be designed by you，显得更加客气且正式。
    • 结果句 the atmosphere will be enhanced 变为 a wider audience is expected to be reached，不仅用了被动，还提升了结果的层次（从氛围提升到受众覆盖）。
  4. 内容创新度：展示内容升级为 “fusion of traditional embroidery and 3D printing” (传统刺绣与3D打印的融合)，极好地切题了 “innovative craft-making”，体现了极高的立意。理由上升到了 “heritage preservation” (遗产保护) 的高度。

2025英语一大作文

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This table illustrates the ownership of major durable consumer goods per 100 households in China from 2014 to 2023. More specifically, in this survey, the number of air conditioners increased significantly from 75.2 to 145.9. At the same time, the number of washing machines and refrigerators also grew steadily.

①As can be seen from the table, the demand for these goods is gaining momentum. Specifically, the reasons are as follows: ②To begin with, people have more money, because the economy is growing. ③In addition, the price of these goods becomes lower. ④As a result, more families can afford them. ⑤Above are the two important reasons for this trend.

Judging by what is discussed above, it's not difficult to draw the conclusion that our life is becoming better. On the whole, I do believe that this trend will continue in the future.

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这张表格展示了2014年至2023年中国每100户家庭主要耐用消费品的拥有量。更具体地说，在这次调查中，空调的数量从75.2显著增加到145.9。同时，洗衣机和冰箱的数量也稳步增长。
从表格中可以看出，对这些商品的需求势头正劲。具体来说，原因如下：首先，人们有更多的钱，因为经济在增长。此外，这些商品的价格变低了。结果，更多的家庭买得起它们。以上是这一趋势的两个重要原因。
从上面的讨论来看，不难得出结论，我们的生活正在变好。总的来说，我相信这种趋势在未来会继续下去。

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This table illustrates the changes in ownership of major durable consumer goods per 100 households in China from 2014 to 2023. More specifically, in this survey, the number of air conditioners climbed sharply from 75.2 to 145.9. At the same time, the number of washing machines and refrigerators also rose steadily.

①As can be seen from the table, the consumption of durable goods is gaining momentum. Specifically, the reasons are as follows: ②First and foremost, the economy has developed rapidly, since people's disposable income has increased. ③Furthermore, technology has improved the quality of these products. ④Consequently, people are willing to buy more appliances to enjoy life. ⑤These are the main reasons for the phenomenon.

Judging by what is discussed above, it's not difficult to draw the conclusion that China's economy is strong. The most obvious way forward would be to further improve the social welfare system. On the whole, I do believe that an increasing number of people will embrace a more comfortable life.

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这张表格展示了2014年至2023年中国每100户家庭主要耐用消费品拥有量的变化。更具体地说，在这次调查中，空调的数量从75.2急剧攀升至145.9。同时，洗衣机和冰箱的数量也稳步上升。
从表格中可以看出，耐用品的消费势头正劲。具体来说，原因如下：首先，经济发展迅速，因为人们的可支配收入增加了。此外，技术提高了这些产品的质量。因此，人们愿意购买更多的电器来享受生活。这些是这一现象的主要原因。
从上面的讨论来看，不不难出结论，中国经济很强劲。最明显的前进方向是进一步完善社会福利体系。总的来说，我相信越来越多的人将拥抱更舒适的生活。

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This table illustrates the ownership of major durable consumer goods per 100 households in China from 2014 to 2023. More specifically, in this survey, the number of air conditioners is observed to have surged from 75.2 to 145.9. At the same time, washing machines and refrigerators are also shown to have experienced a steady growth.

①As can be seen from the table, the pursuit of a high-quality life is gaining momentum. Specifically, the reasons are as follows: ②Primarily, the rapid economic growth is regarded as the fundamental cause, considering that people's purchasing power has been greatly enhanced. ③Moreover, the desire for a comfortable living environment is emphasized by modern families. ④Hence, these durable goods are purchased by more households. ⑤From what has been mentioned above, we can understand the driving forces behind this trend.

Judging by what is discussed above, it's not difficult to draw the conclusion that this trend reflects the great achievement of social development. The most obvious way forward would be to encourage sustainable consumption. On the whole, I do believe that the quality of life for residents will be further improved.

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这张表格展示了2014年至2023年中国每100户家庭主要耐用消费品的拥有量。更具体地说，在这次调查中，观察到空调数量从75.2激增至145.9。同时，显示洗衣机和冰箱也经历了稳步增长。
从表格中可以看出，对高质量生活的追求势头正劲。具体来说，原因如下：首先，快速的经济增长被视为根本原因，考虑到人们的购买力已大大增强。此外，现代家庭强调对舒适生活环境的渴望。因此，更多的家庭购买了这些耐用品。从上面提到的内容中，我们可以理解这一趋势背后的驱动力。
从上面的讨论来看，不不难出结论，这一趋势反映了社会发展的巨大成就。最明显的前进方向是鼓励可持续消费。总的来说，我相信居民的生活质量将进一步提高。

升级解读（从中策到上策）：

  1. 句式复杂化（被动语态+非谓语）：
    • the number... increased →\rightarrow the number... is observed to have surged (被观察到激增)。
    • machines... rose →\rightarrow machines... are also shown to have experienced... (被显示经历了…)。
  2. 立意拔高：
    • 现象描述从 “consumption” 上升到 “pursuit of a high-quality life” (对高质量生活的追求)。
    • 原因分析中，引入 “fundamental cause” (根本原因) 和 “purchasing power” (购买力)。
    • 结论中，提到 “sustainable consumption” (可持续消费)，体现了更宏观的视野。
  3. 词汇高级化：
    • surged (激增)
    • is regarded as (被认为是)
    • enhanced (增强)
  • driving forces (驱动力)

2023 英语一小作文

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           						 Notice

                      								              			          December 11, 2025
There is a great news! In order to assist Professor Smith with his research project on campus sports activities, the Students' Union intends to recruit a student assistant.

①Specifically, the duties and requirements are as follows: ②To begin with, you need to collect information, because we want to know what sports students like. ③In addition, you should be hard-working and careful. ④As a result, the project can be finished on time. ⑤Above are the two important details about the job.

Please pay much attention to this notice. If you are interested, you can contact us via smith@uni.edu. We are expecting your participation.

                              								 			               The Students' Union

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                                             										 2025年12月11日
有个好消息！为了协助史密斯教授进行关于校园体育活动的研究项目，学生会打算招募一名学生助理。
具体来说，职责和要求如下：首先，你需要收集信息，因为我们想知道学生喜欢什么运动。此外，你应该勤奋细心。结果，项目可以按时完成。以上是关于这份工作的两个重要细节。
请密切关注本通知。如果你感兴趣，可以通过smith@uni.edu联系我们。我们期待你的参与。
                                           											   学生会

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                								                  			            December 11, 2025
In order to facilitate Professor Smith's research project on campus sports activities, the Students' Union intends to recruit a qualified student assistant.

①Specifically, the duties and requirements are as follows: ②First and foremost, the assistant is expected to distribute questionnaires and analyze data, since accuracy is crucial for the research. ③Furthermore, the applicant should possess a passion for research. ④Consequently, the work can be done efficiently. ⑤These are the main duties and requirements for the job.

Please pay much attention to this notice. If you wish to apply, you can send your resume to smith@uni.edu. We are expecting your participation.

                      								                   				     The Students' Union

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                                           								  				 2025年12月11日
为了促进史密斯教授关于校园体育活动的研究项目，学生会打算招募一名合格的学生助理。
具体来说，职责和要求如下：首先，助理需要分发问卷并分析数据，因为准确性对研究至关重要。此外，申请者应具备对研究的热情。因此，工作可以高效完成。这些是关于该职位的主要职责和要求。
请密切关注本通知。如果你想申请，可以将简历发送至smith@uni.edu。我们期待你的参与。
                                          												    学生会

升级解读（从下策到中策）：

  1. 词汇替换：
    • assist →\rightarrow facilitate (促进/使便利)
    • collect information →\rightarrow distribute questionnaires and analyze data (分发问卷和分析数据，更具体专业)
    • hard-working →\rightarrow possess a passion for research (拥有研究热情，更符合学术助理要求)
  2. 句式与逻辑：
    • 原因状语从句 because we want to know... 升级为 since accuracy is crucial for the research (因为准确性对研究至关重要)，逻辑更严密。

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A research project regarding campus sports activities is scheduled to be launched by Professor Smith. In order to ensure the smooth progress of this academic endeavor, a student assistant is urgently needed to be recruited.

①Specifically, the duties and requirements are as follows: ②To begin with, questionnaire distribution and data analysis are expected to be conducted by the assistant, because reliable data is the foundation of research. ③In addition, candidates are required to be equipped with excellent communication and organizational skills. ④As a result, the project objectives are expected to be achieved. ⑤Above are the two important details regarding the recruitment.

Thank you for taking the time and patience to read this notice. If you are interested, please submit your application to smith@uni.edu. Looking forward to your active participation.

                                 												             The Students' Union

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史密斯教授计划启动一项关于校园体育活动的研究项目。为了确保这一学术努力的顺利进行，急需招募一名学生助理。
具体来说，职责和要求如下：首先，问卷分发和数据分析工作预计将由助理进行，因为可靠的数据是研究的基础。此外，要求候选人具备出色的沟通和组织能力。因此，项目目标有望得以实现。以上是关于此次招募的两个重要细节。
感谢您抽出宝贵的时间和耐心阅读本通知。如果您感兴趣，请将申请提交至smith@uni.edu。期待您的积极参与。
     								               						                          学生会

升级解读（从中策到上策）：

  1. 句式复杂化（被动语态）：
    • 主动句 Students' Union intends to recruit... 变为被动结构 a student assistant is urgently needed to be recruited，更加客观正式。
    • 主动句 assistant is expected to distribute... 变为被动结构 questionnaire distribution and data analysis are expected to be conducted by...，强调了工作内容本身。
  2. 词汇高级化：
    • facilitate →\rightarrow ensure the smooth progress of (确保…顺利进行)
    • project →\rightarrow academic endeavor (学术努力/事业)
    • possess →\rightarrow be equipped with (具备/配备)
    • organizational skills (组织能力) 符合更高级的岗位要求。
  3. 立意与逻辑：
    • 引入 “reliable data is the foundation of research” (可靠数据是研究基础) 作为理由，体现了学术严谨性。

2023 英语一大作文

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In the picture, it's not difficult to see that a dragon boat race is being held in a village. Many people are watching it on the bank. At the same time, an old woman says to her husband, "The dragon boat race in our village is becoming more and more lively!"

①The meaning of the picture is that traditional culture is popular. Specifically, the reasons are as follows: ②To begin with, people like traditional festivals, because they are interesting and happy. ③In addition, the government helps the village to hold the race. ④As a result, the village becomes famous. ⑤Above are the two important reasons for this phenomenon.

Judging by what is discussed above, it's not difficult to draw the conclusion that traditional culture is very important. On the whole, I do believe that this trend will continue in the future.

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在图片中，不难看出村里正在举办龙舟赛。许多人在岸上观看。同时，一位老妇人对她的丈夫说：“咱们村的龙舟赛越来越热闹了！”
这张图片的含义是传统文化很受欢迎。具体来说，原因如下：首先，人们喜欢传统节日，因为它们有趣且快乐。此外，政府帮助村庄举办比赛。结果，村庄变得出名了。以上是这一现象的两个重要原因。
从上面的讨论来看，不难得出结论，传统文化非常重要。总的来说，我相信这种趋势在未来会继续下去。

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As is vividly depicted in the cartoon, a dragon boat race is in full swing in a village. Crowds of villagers are cheering for the athletes on the bank. More specifically, an elderly lady remarks to her husband with excitement, "The dragon boat race in our village is getting more and more lively!"

①The picture conveys a clear message that traditional culture is being revived. Specifically, the reasons are as follows: ②First and foremost, with the improvement of living standards, people pay more attention to spiritual life. ③Furthermore, traditional customs can boost rural tourism. ④Consequently, the village economy develops rapidly. ⑤These are the main reasons for the prosperity of traditional culture.

Judging by what is discussed above, it's not difficult to draw the conclusion that culture is the soul of a nation. The most obvious way forward would be to encourage young people to inherit these traditions. On the whole, I do believe that traditional culture will shine brighter.

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正如漫画中生动描绘的那样，一场龙舟赛正在村里如火如荼地进行。成群的村民在岸上为运动员欢呼。更具体地说，一位老太太兴奋地对丈夫说：“咱们村的龙舟赛越来越热闹了！”
这张图片传达了一个明确的信息，即传统文化正在复兴。具体来说，原因如下：首先，随着生活水平的提高，人们更加关注精神生活。此外，传统习俗可以促进乡村旅游。因此，村庄经济发展迅速。这些是传统文化繁荣的主要原因。
从上面的讨论来看，不难得出结论，文化是一个国家的灵魂。最明显的前进方向是鼓励年轻人继承这些传统。总的来说，我相信传统文化将更加光彩夺目。

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As is vividly portrayed in the drawing, a traditional dragon boat race is being conducted with great enthusiasm, with the riverbank packed with spectators. It is worth noting that the scene is highly praised by an elderly couple, who exclaim that the event is becoming increasingly bustling.

①It is evident that the cartoon reflects the rejuvenation of traditional Chinese culture. Specifically, the reasons are as follows: ②Primarily, cultural confidence is regarded as the fundamental motivation, considering that people are taking more pride in their heritage. ③Moreover, the strategy of rural revitalization is effectively promoted by such cultural activities. ④Hence, traditional customs are embraced by modern society. ⑤From what has been mentioned above, we can understand the significance of this phenomenon.

Judging by what is discussed above, it's not difficult to draw the conclusion that protecting traditional culture is protecting our spiritual home. The most obvious way forward would be to integrate traditional culture with modern life. On the whole, I do believe that Chinese culture will continue to flourish.

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正如画作中生动描绘的那样，一场传统的龙舟赛正在热情洋溢地进行，河岸上挤满了观众。值得注意的是，这一场景受到了一对老年夫妇的高度赞扬，他们惊叹这项活动变得越来越热闹。
显然，这幅漫画反映了中国传统文化的复兴。具体来说，原因如下：首先，文化自信被视为根本动力，考虑到人们对自己的遗产越来越感到自豪。此外，乡村振兴战略也通过此类文化活动得到了有效促进。因此，传统习俗被现代社会所拥抱。从上面提到的内容中，我们可以理解这一现象的意义。
从上面的讨论来看，不难得出结论，保护传统文化就是保护我们的精神家园。最明显的前进方向是将传统文化与现代生活相结合。总的来说，我相信中国文化将继续繁荣昌盛。